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导师说|留学申请文书怎么写才能拿到顶尖院校offer !

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这位学生有一个比较大的特点,她在高中阶段非常积极地参与了很多活动台湾大乐透,有跟专业相关的,也有跟专业不是特别相关的,还是一位积极活跃的学生。

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因为申请美国方向的话,需要你在系统里非常详细地填写这些内容。她做的跟专业相关的活动,他们学校当时做了一个时装秀。在时装秀中,因为她是非常喜欢化妆的女孩子,也非常擅长化妆,帮走秀的同学去化妆。除此之外还担任了海报设计师,也做了一些他们做的杂志的排版,这跟平面设计是相关的。

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她从小又是一个非常发散性思维、非常有创意的孩子,她觉得对她有很大的打击。回想到自己艺术方面经历的时候,写了很多对于艺术创作的思考,自己当初如何克服这样的难关,怎么去平衡好跟老师之间的关系,并且能够坚持自己的艺术创作理念的过程。

这篇文书可以看出她对艺术方面非常有深入思考,非常有想法的孩子台湾大乐透。最后结尾的时候,她又把这个画像带回到了自己在日本滑雪的场景中,当时她想到了能够克服的专业方面的困难,也能克服当时滑雪时候的恐惧和困难。这时候她站了起来,这时候心境完全不一样了,擦干眼泪,很顺利地滑到山脚下。

这样一篇文书非常生动,很能体现出自己的个人特质。这个孩子比较大的优势在于:确实在高中阶段很认真准备了很多学校的活动或者专业方面的提升,还是比较有想法的。

所以,在这里我给出的建议就是早规划、早准备,千万不要拖着!


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